Feedback

Zach and Bowen

1. I was in the bathroom :(

Cole and Tom

1. A big improvement compared to the first performance - the beginning and the middle became a lot more clear. Good use of props and the stage
2. The ending was a bit unclear
3. Fear/misunderstanding
4. Friends
5. They could've added some lines to make a better ending

Amy and John

1. Good voice projection, good use of props
2. The meaning of "Don't" was unclear
3. Fear, anger, frustration, misunderstanding
4. Father/daughter
5. They could've edited the script to make the story a bit clearer

Mike and Percy

1. Good emotion and body language
2. A bit of confusion in the beginning
3. Frustration, calmness
4. Students - classmates
5. They could project their voices to make them a bit louder and therefore make the story more convincing

Abe and Dasha

1. Good use of space, good voice projection, the story is very clear, good emotion
2. The relationship was unclear in the first try
3. Anger, misunderstanding, frustration
4. A couple
5. Use more convincing body language