- I think my final draft turned out to be better than I expected, but I still feel like I could've done even better.
- I worked more on adding detail to the analysis, and also putting in more quotes to make the text more interesting.
- The easy part was finding the "hidden meaning" in-between the lines, but the difficulty of this assignment was actually trying to explain what the poem is trying to tell the readers by those "hidden meanings".
- My strengths in this essay are the great use of detail and complete explanation of the poem's under-surface meanings, but the weakness is that it appears to be a bit repetitive.
- If I had more time, I would totally spend it on improving my essay.
- I think I will get the top points on 1) Paragraphs, 2) Word count, and 3) Song title in quotation marks
- I feel like I will lose points on 1) Original ideas, 2) Essay clarity, and 3) Sentence lengths variety.
Monday, 14 October 2019
Final draft reflection
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